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How to
Phrase Counter Arguments
In your writing
in this and other courses, you will need to offer some evaluation
of the views encountered in the writing of others. Effective counter-argument
is an essential component of building a convincing argument. So,
how to go about phrasing your counter argument? Check out some
of the examples below as each one offers a different method for
phrasing a counter-argument. Many of these are successful at reminding
the reader very briefly of the portion of another author's writing
to which the writer will respond through effective
paraphrase and quotation while integrating
in key phrases
that indicate the writer's view before
presenting the evidence or reasoning
that refutes the point.
The
following are excerpted from letters written to Harper’s
Magazine, November 2002
Example
1: |
Silverstein
was very nearly correct in his assessment
that the headquarters at Famous Poets Society must
be modest, only “two rooms.”
The fact is,
they are headquartered in a one-room
office with many volunteers doing their part to make
sure no poet with a dream is left behind.
Pamela
Schuknecht
San Diego |
Example
2: |
Martin
Amis’s complaint about
the feeblemindedness of religion
has,
in these times when we are terrorized by religion’s
literalism, much to recommend it, even
to a scholar of religious studies. Unfortunately,
Amis significantly oversimplifies: religious belief
has a strange and consequential history.
Until
the sixteenth and seventeenth centuries, and then only in
the West,
the “believing” that
Amis excoriates did not involve
literalistic claims about matters of fact but
instead emphasized cherishing,
trust and loyalty. The word’s
etymology is cognate with the German belieben, “to hold
dear,” and, perhaps surprisingly, the Latin libindo,
“desire.” As the late historian of comparative
religion Wilfred Cantwell Smith has shown, the Reformation
and early modern science effectively colluded in a momentous
redefinition of this key term. Thus have we been led to a
distorted theory of religion (religions as “belief systems”),
as well as to a practice impelled, despite accommodations
and mitigations, toward the toxic pseudo-certainties of fundamentalism.
Not
unreason,
then, as such but an excess of misplaced rationalism
in the modern period has produced what
Amis laments as feeblemindedness. And although neither
Arnold nor Leavis, let alone political correctness, has given
us a viable alternative to religion-as-belief, clearly
aesthetic modes are more fitting
ones for a healthy religion than
are the scientific criteria that religion has futilely sought
to satisfy for half a millennium.
Given
this history, Marx got it wrong and Martin
Amis may want to reconsider: the criticism not of religion
but of literal belief is the beginning of all criticism.
Daniel
Noel
Pacifica Graduate Institute
Carpinteria California |
Example
3: |
Ted
Fishman states, in his essay vilifying global capitalism,
that “ethnic and religious divisions, grievances over
political participation and class, matter little in today’s
private wars.” He then attributes these conflicts to
goods, such as diamonds, gold, and oil, that attract anonymous
global capital.
I
must take issue with Fishman’s thinking.
In Africa it is impossible to separate ethnicity from economic
specialization as the genesis of political conflict. Governments
in that part of the world are divided along ethnic lines,
and the most important resources are controlled, overwhelmingly
by the ruling class. These individuals, with the illimitable
appetite of kleptocrats, assign the control of “national
assets” to their cohorts and sycophants, whose role
is to empower members of their own ethnicity and exclude everyone
else.
Fishman’s
argument would have been more compelling had he acknowledged
the strong, unbreakable link that exists between ethnic conflict
and economic specialization.
John
L. Kiggundu
Charlotttesville, Va. |
Example
4: |
In
his discussion of Martin Luther King’s legacy,
Anthony Walton cynically chooses to
ignore a great deal of substantive progress made by
African Americans. By failing even to
mention the work of so-called
revisionist writers such as Thomas Sowell and Shelby Steele,
Walton creates the impression
that there is a consensus on the race
issue, agreement that black victims are repressed by institutional
white racism. In fact, today
there is no such monolithic view.
(not
sure of author). |
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